Eunice, this is awesome! It's so clear and the direction is good too!
I have only one suggestion. When the monk goes to grab the tigers tail, we see that the tiger is eating a watermelon. If You could have the camera show only the tail, without revealing the watermelon till the last moment, it would keep the audience from knowing that he is a vegetarian till the last moment and so, make the joke of him being all red from watermelon juice even funnier when you reveal that it was watermelon instead of blood.
Ahaha very nice and funny story Eunice, I love it =D And nice ending credits, I was wondering what else was on those walls. Can't wait to see this completed!
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Eunice, this is awesome! It's so clear and the direction is good too!
I have only one suggestion. When the monk goes to grab the tigers tail, we see that the tiger is eating a watermelon. If You could have the camera show only the tail, without revealing the watermelon till the last moment, it would keep the audience from knowing that he is a vegetarian till the last moment and so, make the joke of him being all red from watermelon juice even funnier when you reveal that it was watermelon instead of blood.
Ahaha very nice and funny story Eunice, I love it =D And nice ending credits, I was wondering what else was on those walls. Can't wait to see this completed!
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